Back to Ada and Rob! We’re already past the 80th page of this chapter… It’ll be longer than I originally planned. I don’t think I’ll be able to fit everything into under 10 pages, hah!
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How are you guys doing? Vaccinations are finally moving forward in Japan so I’m quite optimistic! A month or two more and I might be able to go hiking again without being afraid of the trains haha. I’m really looking forward to it!
I spent this weekend revising my book but I’ll probably need another week… And then my trusty alpha-reader will give his verdict. I also heard back from an literary agent who offers query critique services. I sent them over my query for “The Cleansed Ones” (that’s the book with the shark-faced centipede) and I guess they liked it? The main problem is, the book has 130k words and it turns out that most agents refuse books longer than 120k right off the bat. So hmmm… I can either shelve it for now or remove aaaaall those words. Somehow. I have no idea how, because the book is action-packed and there’s not much time spent navel-gazing or thinking (about future, or about the consequences, or about anything at all). In any case – if you’re writing, 120k is the limit for a fantasy debut!
Also, I posted a little sneak peek for Historia on the game’s Patreon so if you feel like supporting our horror visual novel project please take a look!